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the_moonmoth ([personal profile] the_moonmoth) wrote in [community profile] star_trek_flashfic 2009-07-08 11:55 am (UTC)

For a story that looked kind of sweet and fluffy on the surface, it had an awful lot of heart. I have so much love for your Spock and McCoy, especially this:

"Perhaps we are endangered species but that does not mean we are alone," Spock says, solemn as shit, and Hikaru backs away slowly to give them time.

And this:

He doesn't hear what Jim says which is probably a good thing, but he's not quite clear of hearing range when the doc says, "When you were that age, didn't you want someone to put you first?"

Lovely, character-piercing moments. Good job \0/

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